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- Mon Jan 14, 2019 2:15 pm
- ForumCOLON Chris's Friends Fiction
- TopicCOLON The Templar's Bowl
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The only criticism that struck me is that narrative stories usually come back to the narrator between scenes, or at least with every major shift in the story. We started out in relatively modern times, then were taken back a couple decades, and from there assurances obsèques , we are paging between...