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Re: Movie?
I'd watch it
- Wed Oct 09, 2013 4:21 pm
- ForumCOLON Website Design
- TopicCOLON I need help and suggestions
- RepliesCOLON 6
- ViewsCOLON 5755
Re: I need help and suggestions
Wish I knew how to help.
Obviously, we would all like to spend some more time wandering the halls of Dr. S's imagination, but we understand why you can't post it.
Does he have any talented students you could ask for content?
Obviously, we would all like to spend some more time wandering the halls of Dr. S's imagination, but we understand why you can't post it.
Does he have any talented students you could ask for content?
- Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:33 pm
- ForumCOLON New Fiction
- TopicCOLON Pride and Puppetry
- RepliesCOLON 1
- ViewsCOLON 6047
Re: Pride and Puppetry
Nice short.
Seems like more could be done with it than just two parts, though.
The potential is there right now for a novelette
Seems like more could be done with it than just two parts, though.
The potential is there right now for a novelette
- Sun Aug 18, 2013 2:17 am
- ForumCOLON Chris's Friends Fiction
- TopicCOLON Financial Freedom
- RepliesCOLON 21
- ViewsCOLON 22564
Re: Financial Freedom
Exciting!
Didn't notice any mistakes this time.
Didn't notice any mistakes this time.
- Wed Aug 07, 2013 6:00 pm
- ForumCOLON Chris's Friends Fiction
- TopicCOLON Financial Freedom
- RepliesCOLON 21
- ViewsCOLON 22564
Re: Financial Freedom
Moving along well. Couple of typos I noticed: If and when I meet your parents, I'll deliver these two them right away." They hoped out, dug in the sandy soil, and… well, did what cats do in the sand. the swarm reached their goal quickly. mixed cases - swarm is a singular noun That's all I found
- Mon Jul 22, 2013 1:59 pm
- ForumCOLON New Fiction
- TopicCOLON Civilians
- RepliesCOLON 3
- ViewsCOLON 5935
Re: Civilians
Well, it just drops the reader into what seems to be an ongoing war, and no indication that the war is drawing to a close. It's a good piece by itself, and everything necessary to understand the story is present, but it is obvious that it is part of a larger story. Sort of reminds me of "The Re...
- Sun Jul 21, 2013 5:32 am
- ForumCOLON Chris's Friends Fiction
- TopicCOLON Financial Freedom
- RepliesCOLON 21
- ViewsCOLON 22564
Re: Financial Freedom
Time for bed, but I can spare enough time to point out the typos I found: Heth noticed he lack of snow and ice on the ground he = the As they approached, Heth pretended not to notice as strode past a line of corpses as they strode? Heth was just beginning to wonder how the Brothers had wrecked so mu...
- Sat Jul 20, 2013 9:34 pm
- ForumCOLON New Fiction
- TopicCOLON Civilians
- RepliesCOLON 3
- ViewsCOLON 5935
Re: Civilians
Was this one a chapter from a larger story?
Sounds like an interesting read.
Sounds like an interesting read.
- Sat Jun 29, 2013 5:48 pm
- ForumCOLON Announcements
- TopicCOLON Back surgery
- RepliesCOLON 6
- ViewsCOLON 9997
Re: Back surgery
Back, finally. Had a bit of an incedent the other day... The power supply that was providing sustinence to both of my Windiws laptops surged and took out the motherboards. So, I'm on a Linux box, and trying to rebuild my bookmarks, password database, and all that other stuff that's so easy when your...
- Sat Jun 29, 2013 5:44 pm
- ForumCOLON New Fiction
- TopicCOLON Papa Don't 'Low
- RepliesCOLON 2
- ViewsCOLON 5543
Re: Papa Don't 'Low
Great short story.
It would make an interesting prelude to a novel...
It would make an interesting prelude to a novel...