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by kf6eml
Thu Oct 10, 2013 9:27 pm
ForumCOLON Merovence
TopicCOLON Movie?
RepliesCOLON 9
ViewsCOLON 8662

Re: Movie?

I'd watch it
by kf6eml
Wed Oct 09, 2013 4:21 pm
ForumCOLON Website Design
TopicCOLON I need help and suggestions
RepliesCOLON 5
ViewsCOLON 4300

Re: I need help and suggestions

Wish I knew how to help.
Obviously, we would all like to spend some more time wandering the halls of Dr. S's imagination, but we understand why you can't post it.

Does he have any talented students you could ask for content?
by kf6eml
Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:33 pm
ForumCOLON New Fiction
TopicCOLON Pride and Puppetry
RepliesCOLON 1
ViewsCOLON 5242

Re: Pride and Puppetry

Nice short.
Seems like more could be done with it than just two parts, though.
The potential is there right now for a novelette
by kf6eml
Sun Aug 18, 2013 2:17 am
ForumCOLON Chris's Friends Fiction
TopicCOLON Financial Freedom
RepliesCOLON 21
ViewsCOLON 19049

Re: Financial Freedom

Exciting!

Didn't notice any mistakes this time.
by kf6eml
Wed Aug 07, 2013 6:00 pm
ForumCOLON Chris's Friends Fiction
TopicCOLON Financial Freedom
RepliesCOLON 21
ViewsCOLON 19049

Re: Financial Freedom

Moving along well. Couple of typos I noticed: If and when I meet your parents, I'll deliver these two them right away." They hoped out, dug in the sandy soil, and… well, did what cats do in the sand. the swarm reached their goal quickly. mixed cases - swarm is a singular noun That's all I found
by kf6eml
Mon Jul 22, 2013 1:59 pm
ForumCOLON New Fiction
TopicCOLON Civilians
RepliesCOLON 3
ViewsCOLON 4981

Re: Civilians

Well, it just drops the reader into what seems to be an ongoing war, and no indication that the war is drawing to a close. It's a good piece by itself, and everything necessary to understand the story is present, but it is obvious that it is part of a larger story. Sort of reminds me of "The Re...
by kf6eml
Sun Jul 21, 2013 5:32 am
ForumCOLON Chris's Friends Fiction
TopicCOLON Financial Freedom
RepliesCOLON 21
ViewsCOLON 19049

Re: Financial Freedom

Time for bed, but I can spare enough time to point out the typos I found: Heth noticed he lack of snow and ice on the ground he = the As they approached, Heth pretended not to notice as strode past a line of corpses as they strode? Heth was just beginning to wonder how the Brothers had wrecked so mu...
by kf6eml
Sat Jul 20, 2013 9:34 pm
ForumCOLON New Fiction
TopicCOLON Civilians
RepliesCOLON 3
ViewsCOLON 4981

Re: Civilians

Was this one a chapter from a larger story?
Sounds like an interesting read.
by kf6eml
Sat Jun 29, 2013 5:48 pm
ForumCOLON Announcements
TopicCOLON Back surgery
RepliesCOLON 6
ViewsCOLON 8585

Re: Back surgery

Back, finally. Had a bit of an incedent the other day... The power supply that was providing sustinence to both of my Windiws laptops surged and took out the motherboards. So, I'm on a Linux box, and trying to rebuild my bookmarks, password database, and all that other stuff that's so easy when your...
by kf6eml
Sat Jun 29, 2013 5:44 pm
ForumCOLON New Fiction
TopicCOLON Papa Don't 'Low
RepliesCOLON 2
ViewsCOLON 4682

Re: Papa Don't 'Low

Great short story.
It would make an interesting prelude to a novel...

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