Return With Your Spacesuit or On It

Review and discuss Christopher Stasheff's new short stories.
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Return With Your Spacesuit or On It

Postby Ortho the Frank » Sun May 08, 2011 11:33 pm

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Re: Return With Your Spacesuit or On It

Postby kf6eml » Sun May 25, 2014 12:21 pm

Interesting futuristic tragedy. Seems like a set-up for larger story; is there more to come of it?

Errors I found:

Obviously meant to be a solder

soldier

An uncomfortable period of silence of silence

repeated phrase

-hang-out-with-space-cruismg-nobodies-who-will-only-get-their-common-sense-impaired-emorions-in-a-striny-gooey-lumpy-mess

cruising, emotions, stringy

wasn't going to be allowed back into die Space Academy

the

He snitched his gaze to his left,

switched?

The picture in-question

unneeded hyphen
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Re: Return With Your Spacesuit or On It

Postby Ortho the Frank » Tue May 27, 2014 2:53 pm

Thanks! Corrected. I think those were OCR errors I missed the first time around.

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