The Afterlife of Saint Vidicon

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The Afterlife of Saint Vidicon

Postby Ortho the Frank » Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:42 pm

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Re: The Afterlife of Saint Vidicon

Postby kf6eml » Tue Mar 12, 2013 11:48 pm

The link at the bottom of the second part seems to be self-referential... Is this intended to be humorous?

Because it is.

I found a couple problems, but not much serious:

Typo

Then the light itself began to dwindle and to darkened, until he groped within a lightless place.

Mixing tenses

yet he did resolve upon the onward march, rebuked his heart most sternly, and held the fear within its place
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Re: The Afterlife of Saint Vidicon

Postby Ortho the Frank » Wed Mar 13, 2013 1:04 pm

Oops. My bad. Looks like Murphy got me. I'll fix the link ASAP.

Thanks for the spell check, too. Ironically, this was from the published version, so it got by the professional editors, too... and you caught it!

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