Templars Bowl

Review and discuss Chris's friend' short stories.
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Templars Bowl

Post by cosmosc »

Hi Folk, this is Pete D.
TB is a my first try at something I created that wasn't going for a laugh somewhere. I really would like to hear what you what you have to say, think and feel about the characters. Like most of my stuff, I pulled from libraries and historical sources and, when I had a gap, my own imagination.
I think it is one of my better attempts- I even fooled his Emenence the Grand Stasheff TWICE on the Grail! So please guys, as the tale unfolds send me your thoughts. As in real life, I tend to get all confused and disoriented in anybody's tavern, so if you don't get a response from me right away, just give me some time.
Thanks. Pete D
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Re: Templars Bowl

Post by kf6eml »

So far, so good.

It has the foundation for a good story. Let's see what you build on it!
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