By the Light of the Silvery Moon

Review and discuss Chris's friend' short stories.
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By the Light of the Silvery Moon

Postby Ortho the Frank » Tue Nov 05, 2013 8:28 pm

Critiques? Comments? Suggestions? Put them here!
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Re: By the Light of the Silvery Moon

Postby kf6eml » Wed Nov 06, 2013 4:28 pm

Nice!
Can't wait to read more!

Found one typo:

I became sad, angry, anxious, nauseas, weak, strong

nauseous?

but that's about it.

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