Stranger in a Strange Land Rover

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Stranger in a Strange Land Rover

Postby Ortho the Frank » Wed Nov 27, 2013 8:59 pm

Critiques? Comments? Suggestions? Put them here!
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Re: Stranger in a Strange Land Rover

Postby kf6eml » Thu Nov 28, 2013 4:11 pm

Loved it.
A lot like the old classics. Maybe I'm not reading enough, any more, but I miss stories like this.
Thanks.

Only noticed two typoes:

it looked for signs of life, water, and anything else of use to a Robinson Carusoe!

Crusoe

it would walk an ancient river bed or lakesshore,

lakeshore
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Re: Stranger in a Strange Land Rover

Postby Ortho the Frank » Wed Dec 04, 2013 6:32 pm

Corrections made. Thanks!

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