Stranger in a Strange Land Rover

[Ortho the Frank]

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[kf6eml]

Loved it.
A lot like the old classics. Maybe I'm not reading enough, any more, but I miss stories like this.
Thanks.

Only noticed two typoes:

it looked for signs of life, water, and anything else of use to a Robinson Carusoe!

Crusoe

it would walk an ancient river bed or lakesshore,

lakeshore

[Ortho the Frank]

Corrections made. Thanks!